慕同学

能否批改一下我写的2010年考研英语小作文?

老师,10年小作文请您看看。

来自 慕同学 的提问 2021-11-24 08:58:46 阅读341

慕同学:

1. 都有since了,肯定是个现在完成时,因此应改成it has been long since our...

2. miss是动词,不能和am用在一句话里,因此改成I miss you very much. 并且 不能说I very miss you.要说I miss you very much.

3. In America没有the

4. 注意是participate in

5. 注意grateful的拼写

6. enable sb. to do sth.注意to不要丢掉。即it enables me to get an edge...

7. it is important for me...是for sb.

8. 最后Your early reply...注意是your

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