一、原文:
       ①Some sites design their agents to tempt job hunters to return. ②When CareerSite’s agent sends out messages to those who have signed up for its service, for example, it includes only three potential jobs—those it considers the best matches. ③There may be more matches in the database; job hunters will have to visit the site again to find them—and they do. ④“On the day after we send our messages, we see a sharp increase in our traffic,” says Seth Peets, vice president of marketing for CareerSite.      话题:线上找工作
       二、步骤      1. 分意群(根据标志词分意群:标点前、连词前、介词前、动词前)      2. 定属性(根据意群的相对位置定属性:连接词后是“从句”)      3. 调语序(根据属性调整意群的语序:定语提前或名词反复说两遍、状语提前)      4. 理翻译(根据调整后的语序调整翻译:结合语境和单词感觉,调整措辞和翻译)
       三、演练      1. 分意群When CareerSite’s agent /sends out messages /to those /who have signed up for its service/, for example/, it includes only three potential jobs/—those/ it considers/ the best matches.      2. 定属性:      ①those+who从句;who连接的从句为定语从句/修饰前面的代词;      those(who have signed up for its service)      ②when从句,主句;when从句为状语从句      (When CareerSite’s agent /sends out messages /to those /who have signed up for its service/, for example/), it includes only three potential jobs/—those/ it considers/ the best matches.      ③those/ it considers/ the best matches;代词 those 和 it 同时出现,it 后面还有动词 consider,则从 it 开始是一个省略 that 的定语从句those(that it considers/ the best matches)      3. 调语序:      ①that连接的从句翻译在名词之前,翻译成“...的”;      (who have signed up for its service)those 翻译成 “...的那些(人)”      ③that 连接的从句翻译在名词之前,翻译成“...的”      (that it considers/ the best matches)those翻译成“...的那些(匹配职位)”
       4. 理翻译:      难点:match      l match 有“配对、匹配”的意思,这里具体指的是破折号前面“匹配的岗位”
       四、理解      全句翻译:比如,当CareerSite’s agent给那些注册了它们网站服务的客户发送信息的时候,它只会发送三个潜在的岗位--那些它认为最匹配的岗位
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