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能否批改一下我写的这篇2017年考研英语二的大作文?

麻烦老师批改一下这篇英二2017年的大作文

来自 N同学 的提问 2021-12-13 13:39:28 阅读299

N同学:

第一段第二行museum也得加s。第五行改为museums'。visitor也要加s。第六行gradual写错了。不要用过去式,用一般现在时。最后一行的that改为than。

第二段第二行改为as follows。

第三段结论太草率,而且感觉写的是废话,没有你分析的成分在里面,请再想想。

你似乎不喜欢给名词加s,但是很不幸至少文中所有的museum都要加s,因为你并没有单指某一个museum。

请再加强练习,预计11分。(´・ᴗ・`)

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